one thing i think can be fixed is the order of the convos, ,like in the second strip, put what is being said to the left, because english is read from left to right. So you the ‘yeah’ should be after the question…if that makes sense. Readers dont like to look for what they should be reading, it should come natural. that being said, YOUR COMICS ARE GENIUS. KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!
Going through and rereading these… I don’t think I realized how much his art style changed/improved. I mean it’s all nothing too crazy but even still, it’s neat that you can see such an improvement.
hahahaha I’m digging the art here man–very chic and drole!
haha im digging askia’s usage of words, very chic and drole!
I dig. Also.
one thing i think can be fixed is the order of the convos, ,like in the second strip, put what is being said to the left, because english is read from left to right. So you the ‘yeah’ should be after the question…if that makes sense. Readers dont like to look for what they should be reading, it should come natural. that being said, YOUR COMICS ARE GENIUS. KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fixed!
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This is fine and all but I want to be in the story already
Going through and rereading these… I don’t think I realized how much his art style changed/improved. I mean it’s all nothing too crazy but even still, it’s neat that you can see such an improvement.